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Post by ᴄʀʏsᴛᴀʟғʀᴏsᴛ on Aug 22, 2014 14:09:33 GMT -5
I'm looking for a beta reader for my novel, and I figured since we're all writers and avid readers here, it would be a good place to find someone. If you're interested in reading through my novel and giving me feedback, please let me know. I'm not looking for you to tell me it's good. I am looking for specific feedback. What did you enjoy? What didn't you like? Did you find any discontinuity in the story? Plot holes? Did anything confuse you?
For those of you who don't know, my novel is set in the Secret World universe. It's about two girls with great destinies; one is Nephilim, to be the Savior of the Lucidus, and one is a witch, the avenger of the Malum. It's told from a duel point of view, and there's four books (three unwritten) in the series. This one is called the Fires of Hell.
One, two, three, four. I declare a
TIME WAR
Five, six, seven, eight. Daleks scream
"EXTERMINATE!"
Nine, ten, eleven, twelve. The Doctor
DIED and SILENCE FELL
Twelve, eleven, ten, nine. Here he goes
BACK IN TIME
Eight, seven, six, five. Saving everybody's
LIVES
Four, three, two, one. Grab her hand and whisper
"RUN."
Post by ᴄʀʏsᴛᴀʟғʀᴏsᴛ on Aug 22, 2014 15:18:24 GMT -5
I'll send it to you chapter by chapter Would you like to do it over messaging or email?
One, two, three, four. I declare a
TIME WAR
Five, six, seven, eight. Daleks scream
"EXTERMINATE!"
Nine, ten, eleven, twelve. The Doctor
DIED and SILENCE FELL
Twelve, eleven, ten, nine. Here he goes
BACK IN TIME
Eight, seven, six, five. Saving everybody's
LIVES
Four, three, two, one. Grab her hand and whisper
"RUN."
Post by ᴄʀʏsᴛᴀʟғʀᴏsᴛ on Aug 22, 2014 21:41:21 GMT -5
Got it. Sending the first chapter right after I post this
One, two, three, four. I declare a
TIME WAR
Five, six, seven, eight. Daleks scream
"EXTERMINATE!"
Nine, ten, eleven, twelve. The Doctor
DIED and SILENCE FELL
Twelve, eleven, ten, nine. Here he goes
BACK IN TIME
Eight, seven, six, five. Saving everybody's
LIVES
Four, three, two, one. Grab her hand and whisper
"RUN."
Post by ᴄʀʏsᴛᴀʟғʀᴏsᴛ on Oct 7, 2014 12:22:41 GMT -5
Haha, okay. Thank!
One, two, three, four. I declare a
TIME WAR
Five, six, seven, eight. Daleks scream
"EXTERMINATE!"
Nine, ten, eleven, twelve. The Doctor
DIED and SILENCE FELL
Twelve, eleven, ten, nine. Here he goes
BACK IN TIME
Eight, seven, six, five. Saving everybody's
LIVES
Four, three, two, one. Grab her hand and whisper
"RUN."